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Thursday, December 16, 2010

Which Witch- Elise Korngut

Which Witch

By Elise Korngut

Which Witch by Eva Ibbotson is a great, magical, creative book that is full of wonderful, whimsical surprises. When I read this book I felt like Belladonna was being treated unfairly. But then when I got deeper and deeper in the book I realized that the other witches opened up to Belladonna in some way. I think that the story was good but the way the author wrote it wasn’t as good.

One way that Eva Ibbotson did a good job on Which Witch was by introducing all the characters as they fell into the story. One way she did that was by giving each witch a paragraph or two just for them self. She described each witch, were they lived, and what there familiar was, for example for Mable Wrack she lived in a apartment above her fish shop and her familiar is a octopus. Another way that Eva Ibbotson did a good job was by hooking you into the book at the end of chapters. One way she did that was by saying at the end of the chapter “Matron was on the first step . . . the second. . . . Now she was almost up to him, her arms outstretched to get him by the shoulders and shake him. Terence took a long deep breath. He closed his eyes . . .” I really wanted to read more so I went to the next chapter but . . . it was in a whole different place.

I thought that the story was good but not the way Eva Ibbotson wrote it. The story was about Arriman the Awful trying to find a wife. It was just written in a way that felt different and not as exciting as other books I have read, for example in the scene when Arriman was describing his contest it felt like it could have been more exciting but the author chose not to. The scene felt boring and dull it made me want to stop. But sometimes it was really exciting like my example before.

As you can see Which Witch by Eva Ibbotson is a pretty good book it was fun, sometimes exciting, and magical. The only thing I didn’t like was the way the book was written. I suggest this book to people who like magic and contests. If I had to choose I would give this book at least 3 trees.

9 comments:

  1. this really makes me want to read it! Good job.:*]

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  2. I really like how you put in a lot of adjectives in your post!

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  3. Great job Elise. Excellent detail and good supporting evidence. My only suggestion is cut the number of times that you use Eva's name, it can be a little repetitive. Well done!

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  4. I like how you made your opinions clear!

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  5. Your summary was fantastic!You didn't give to much away so it made the book even more intriguing.

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  6. I like the way the way you put allot of detail in to your reporty-thingy.

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  7. Elise,
    I really liked your post! It was great that you put a lot of detail into your post!! I loved how you stated your assertion with "Which Witch by Eva Ibbotson made a great, magical,creative, book that has wonderfull whimsical suprises" you also had great evidence !! Nice job!!!

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