Under the blood red sun
by Sasha Greeneschmitz
Under the blood red sun was a vary disturbing book. I don’t want to say only bad things about the book so I won’t. I liked the characters and the way it was written but I still can’t get over some of the things that happened in it. I felt like in the end Tomi had no family left and things weren't going to get any better. It was kind of like a horror story in a kind of way it is a little scary no scary i snot the word disturbing.
One reason why it was disturbing was on page 127 Tomi and his grandfather have to kill the racing pigeons one by one by slitting there necks and letting them bleed to death on the grass. If that is not convincing then listen to this. First of all it is about war. Second when Tomi’s dad in on there boat with his helper Senjie the guns start shooting and Tomi’s’ dad gets shot in the leg and Senjie gets shot and dies.
I would like to know what the author’s inspiration was to write this book. I don’t think Senjie should have died. I also think that there should have been more things in the book that were good and not so many that were bad.
For those reasons I think that the book Under the Blood Red Sun was a very disturbing book. The book was disturbing but it was written okay. I give this book 2 trees for it's bloody description and the lack of description the other had on the not bloody parts.
Nice job Sasha!! That pigeon part was really gross. I liked how you put the page number!!
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I agree with Coco. Referencing the page number is a good idea! That way, if you really want to read it, you can easily do it. Excellent voice (that means it sounds like you).
ReplyDeleteThis book does not sound good ;-0
ReplyDeleteWhere is the rating:-?
ReplyDeletegood job I WANT TO read it agen
ReplyDeleteSasha, great job. Very convincing piece. I 'd like you to reread aloud the first paragraph out loud to yourself and fix some of the punctuation and spelling. I really like this post.
ReplyDeleteThe part about the pigeons was a little disturbing and VERY sad.
ReplyDeletegrate job you have a lot of comments
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