Overboard
The book Over Board is one of the best books I ever have read, but I think the author could have made the ending not so immediate.
Some evidence of the ending being immediate is that When Emily docked she was a sleep and then she only held up her hand to Isman so that he would not go away. Then the book is over.
If I was the author I would make that she wakes up and calls her parents and tell them the truth and to tell them to that she was coming home, and that Isman should become Emily’s step brother.
I like that the author had a lot of descriptive words like croaked, crackled.
So you can see in my examples that the end is a little bit immediate and the author has good words. The author could have made the book longer.
I give this book 4 trees.
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