Witch, Witch ?

Hi, my name’s Iris and I just finished my book group book, Witch Witch? It’s about a wizard named Armin the Awful. He has become bored with just being a black wizard. After visiting a fortune teller he discovers that a even greater and even blacker wizard then himself is coming to take over his duty of being a black wizard.Soon, he decides to get married. The whole story is about him hosting a contest to find the blackest with in the world. I like this story but the way it was written wasn't as good as the plot/ idea.

If I have an assertion(witch I do),then I should have some evidence(witch I will). First off, I think it’s important to know that Mr.Armin the Awful isn't the only main charter in this story. there also is Little Miss Belladonna ,An unfortunate white witch who has fallen madly in love with Armin, and will do any thing to win the contest and become her beloved Armin’s wife.I like the story and I recommend it to any one who was even slightly amused or entertained by the Harry Potter sires. Just Remember there are better writers out there. Also I think that this book has allot of. short. sentences. Also some time she has a lot of running sentences and I think that she should have used the period more in some chapters and less in others and I found my self some times wishing that this author did not get the idea but some one else did.

I think this author should think about his/ her periods. He/she has either to too many or not enough.It depends on the chapter. Also,When you reading this book, It’s like you’re watching a movie and you have to guess what the carters thinking.What I’m trying to say is that this author has little (if any,) Belladonna thought or Armin thought ‘s. I think, no matter how much the carter’s say out loud you should all way include some So and So thought ’s

I think witch witch has a good plot but a wasn't written in a good way. I think sometimes the seances where to short.Also I think sometimes the seances got to long to often.But I think you SHOULD read it if you liked the harry potter books but remember there are better writers out there. All and all, I give this book a total of about 2 out of 5 trees.

Bye,☺