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Wednesday, December 8, 2010

Which Witch

I was reading Which Witch by Eva Ibbotson. I think this is a awful book because its ending is awful. Its like the author just wanted to end the book and in some of the parts it was like the author was trying to be funny but it was not and if i were to read any of her books because i think i would be VERY upset because I would not get my hopes up because I think that it would not be that good of a book.it was one of those books that you cant remember anything that happened in the last chapter let alone the first part of the book you can also ''fall asleep'' as you read this book especially in the beginning of the book and in the middle of the book.

For example when the author was trying to be funny she was saying "and all that she could remember to do was to turn her self into a coffee table. The reason I think the author was just trying to end the book is because at the end she could of put allot more detail. We also wanted to know more at the end she just cut off allot of the things we wanted to know about like what happens blah blah and what happens to blah blah blah stuff like that. The reason I think that you cant remember anything in the chapter before is because the only things I remember is when Ethel does her tree trick the kracken when belladonna does her trick and when they find Tarrance and Rover. The reason I think this book you can ''fall asleep'' in is because the author does not give a good hock at all she starts with a weird beginning and in the middle of the book she just doesn't give any information and no details.

If I were to give advice to the author Eva Ibbotson i would tell her that she needs to give better detail in Which Witch and stop trying to be funny and to re-read what she as written one time more then she does I would tell her that if she does not take my first advice would to make a second book of which witch and to put more detail and edit more.

So as you can see my group hates Which Witch and thinks that you should not read it and that it is bad because she does not give enough information and does not give a good enough ending and a bad hock its boring and you can ''fall asleep'' while reading it.

2 comments:

  1. Really good post I liked how you say some things that you all hated the book.(I hated it to).


    I think you could add

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  2. Mya I think you convince the reader not to read witch witch at all. I like the way you said how you felt about the book

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