The City of Ember By Jeanne DuPrau, I think The City of Ember is a great book. It always had me at the edge my seat reading as fast as I could. I could never anticipate anything (except for one squick) because everything happened unexpectedly!
It has a great setting, for example: The Pipe works is a very moist and gloomy place, but it ends up saving the city. Another example is: The City of Ember; a very dark place that ends up to be under ground! Also:The Land of the People of Sparks, a great place to live, its a beautiful green, farmland. I would love to live there.
It also always had me at the edge of my seat,
Like when: Doon and Lina (the 2 main characters) were streaming down the river with Poppy (a baby) I was afraid Poppy would fall out (I know this sounds cheesy but still that's how you say stuff when you really like books, ask Iris!) Also when Doon couldn’t find Lina I was...scared, no thats not the word...AGITATED thats the word that Doon would leave with out Lina!
Some advice to the author would be; a little more suspending and cliff hangers cause’ some of the book you knew exactly,spot on, bulls eye, what was going to happen other wise...FLAT OUT PERFECTO!!!
As you can see from my assertion, this is a GREAT book and I highly recommend it plus there are three more in the series!
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ReplyDeletegee thanx
ReplyDeleteleah thats ALOT of =]s !
ReplyDeleteI could really hear your voice in it.Great choice of words! Overall, it was a great post!
ReplyDeleteCooper, great job. Reread your post to yourself out loud. You are missing some punctuation (commas and periods). Also your assertions need to agree.
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ReplyDeleteu too maren
ReplyDeleteI really like how you always put your personal style into your writing.It makes a report sound funny. The book sounds really good. How many books are in the series?
ReplyDeleteCooper,
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you could hear your voice in the post and how you explained great details about the book. I think you could have added a bit more about what the book is about. But overall I think you did a great job on doing the blog post!! ;)
I think you should find another way to write" It also always had me at the edge of my seat" in paragraph three. All but that was pretty good.
ReplyDeletegreat post it was very well written you could hear your voice in the text witch is always a good thing to have. You put a lot of detail in your post witch makes it fun to read because you can picture it in your head. Five trees must be really good maybe will read it.
ReplyDeleteCooper, that was a really great post I thought it was really well written, but I think you had a little bit to much of your voice in it. Besides that it was a wonderful post, also I liked how you used a lot of punctuation in your post nice job!
ReplyDeleteTHANK YOU for not giving the book away. You should change the word squik. Over all that was a good post!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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