I thought the book was very page turning and fantastic. Here are some examples.
When the prince is choosing who he wants to marry I wanted to go beyond the limit that we were aloud to go because it was very suspenseful. Also I thought that at times like the time where Miri is dancing with the prince I wished that I could just yell to my book group members that the book was fantastic
I also thought that the book was VERY confusing. Here are some examples.
I thought the part about the bandits was REALLY confusing, like when did they come? And how did they come? I'm REALLY confused. Also I'm really confused about the part wear they go to the woods. I mean REALLY confused. I can't even give evidence I'm so confused.
If I were to give advice to the author this is what I would say. "I think you you need to be more clear about the seine at the wood AND when the bandits come.
But I also think your book was very page turning and VERY well written (besides the confusing parts.)"
So, as you can see from my examples, I thought the book was very page turning and a great book yet I thought the book was very confusing at times. I would rate it 2 1/2 trees.
Mohini,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a very good job and that you had a good sized essay. I also like how much information you put in about the bandits.
I kind of wish that you had put in more information about the confusing parts, I also wish you would fix some typos. You had some in there. Over all, you did a good job.
From,
GRAEME