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Monday, November 29, 2010

derek Kensuke kindom.

I read a book called kensuke kingdom by michael morpurgo. But I did not like it. Because you know what will happen.
The young boy michael go's on a journey to a island called Kensuke Kingdom. where Michael met an old man tells michael about his adventures on the island. Michael and Stella, his dog, try to find a way home.

One thing I did not like was that when he got on the island. It was too predictable at the end.
For example, when he go's into the water, I knew something was going to attack him, either a shark or a jellyfish. Whoopdiedo, it was a jellyfish. No big surprise.
I think the author could have made it more original by having a better plot.

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  2. Derek,

    I liked how your post had lots of character. I am happy you put in a short summary. It helped me understand this post a little bit more!

    A few of the things you need to work on is:

    . Giving more examples about why you did not like the book a lot.
    . Go over your post and look for typos and grammar mistakes.
    . Try to add more details. It would give more support to your post

    I like your blog a lot. Go back and edit it one more time and it will be magnificent!

    -Abbycadabby the...critic!

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