I recently read a book called The Ear, the Eye and the Arm with Jordan, Abby, Matty and Coco. I thought it was a big let down because the beginning was good, the middle 200 pages was pretty much just Tendai, Rita and Kuda sitting around doing nothing, and they also don't do much in the whole book. And there were just a lot of parts that could have been taken out.
The beginning got to the problem like a regular book would. The middle was a waste of time for us because barely anything happened. But what did happen was the ear, eye and arm trying to get to Tendai, Rita, and Kuda. The end we thought was the best part, but we still didn't think it was good enough, so we thought the whole book was a waist of time. And it was suposed to take place in the future but it didn,t have any thing in it from the future
We thought the author spent not enough time making this book interesting or not enough time MAKING the book.
Like I said, this book was good in the beggining, bad in the middle, and the end was the best part, so I would not recomend this book to anyone and neither would my group
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ReplyDeletesay why you didn't or did like some parts with evidence.
you need to tell who the author is.
you need to rate the book.
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-Ronan
ReplyDeleteYour assertion was great but the only thing you forgot was the name of the author and for me it was hard to see your opinion of the book.
In your evidence you say the middle was just a waste of time because nothing happened. You need to say what was boring and not just say it was boring. we want to know what was boring. In your assertion you say that the ending was a let down but in your evidence you say it was the best part?