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Monday, November 29, 2010

Death Mountain


So, I was reading a book called Death Mountain by Sherry Shahan. I think the beginning of the book was not too good but towards the ending the book got better. Overall, the book was okay. I think Sherry Shahan could of made the beginning a bit easier to understand. She did a good job of writing the end.


I think the first paragraph was really confusing, first it talkes about a rusty bottle cap, then a string of RV's, to the Sierra Nevada Mountains ,and dirt bikes, plus hitchhiking in one paragraph. This is why I think the ending was better, because the book made more sense.


In my opinion I think Sherry Shahan could of made the book more easy to understand. I think she should've made the lighting storm part more specific. If she could of made.

Know you know why I thought the book was okay.
If was to rated this book it would be a 5 or a 6 out of 10
I rated this blog post a 4